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@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 date: 2024-10-25
-title: Meet DNSvizor: run your DHCP and DNS MirageOS unikernel
+title: "Meet DNSvizor: run your own DHCP and DNS MirageOS unikernel"
 description:
   The NGI-funded DNSvizor provides core network services on your network; DNS resolution and DHCP.
 tags:
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ author:
 
 TL;DR: We got [NGI0 Entrust (via NLnet)](https://nlnet.nl/entrust/) funding for developing
 [DNSvizor](https://nlnet.nl/project/DNSvizor/) - a DNS resolver and
-DHCP server. Please help us by [showing us your dnsmasq
+DHCP server. Please help us by [sharing with us your dnsmasq
 configuration](https://github.com/robur-coop/dnsvizor/issues/new), so we can
 prioritize the configuration options to support.
 
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ The [domain name system (DNS)](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Domain_Name_System)
 is responsible for translating domain names (such as "robur.coop", "nlnet.nl")
 to IP addresses (such as 193.30.40.138 or 2a0f:7cc7:7cc7:7c40::138) - used by
 computers to talk to each other. Humans can remember domain names instead of
-memorizing IP addresses. Computers than use DNS to translate these domain names
+memorizing IP addresses. Computers then use DNS to translate these domain names
 to IP addresses to communicate with. DNS is a hierarchic, distributed,
 faul-tolerant service.