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 ## Mission
 
-The goal of robur is to develop robust digital infrastructure.  This goal is
-achieved by continuous maintainence of permissively licensed (MIT/ISC/BSD) open
+At robur we to develop robust digital infrastructure. We achieve this goal 
+ by continuous maintainence of permissively licensed (MIT/ISC/BSD) open
 source libraries, which are used by various partners and supporters.
 
-Robur is a non-profit endeavour, the ultimate goal is not to earn as much as
-possible, but instead to enable more people to run their own digital
+Robur is a non-profit endeavour that strives to enable more people to run their own digital
 infrastructure.  Minimising the executable size of services and cutting down
 complexity is crucial to help people to understand the technology.
 
@@ -30,11 +29,11 @@ Supporters can make charitable donations to robur, which will be used for
 further development and maintainence of software and community infrastructure.
 
 Partners can contract robur to develop prototypes (see example
-[projects](/Projects)).  Developed libraries will be open sourced, and are
-reusable by other interested parties.  The application code itself will be
-exclusively copyrighted by the partner.  Some terms are negotiable, e.g.
+[projects](/Projects)).  Developed libraries are open sourced if possible, to be
+reusable by other interested parties.  The application code itself is
+exclusively copyrighted by the partner.  Terms are negotiable, e.g.
 whether the library code will be exclusively licensed to the partner for some
-time (maximum 6 months), influence on the development roadmap, service level
+time, influence on the development roadmap, service level
 agreements (on-call debugging, running infrastructure).
 
 ## Team